Blotting Paper

An attempt to capture a handful of the random thoughts which pass through my head.

Tuesday, July 17, 2007

SHAME

Red hot, red hot,
Slithering, crawling, glowing,
Red hot, red hot
Slithering, crawling, and growing.

Outside to inside,
Head to Toe,
Mouths Open, Words spoken,
Red Hot Woe.

Red hot, red hot,
Slithering, crawling, receding,
Red hot, red hot
Slithering, crawling, and retreating.

Red fades,
Replaced with black,
Words Spoken,
Replaced with shame.

2 Comments:

Blogger Dreamcatcher said...

Read it again today...indeed many connotations!!! To me its bout a heated argument and anger!!!

11:44 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

its hard to identify the emotions...different feelings will be experienced according to one's present emotional state....but emotions there are...in every word in every line...pulsating emotions

6:40 AM  

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